The door hung askew in its frame. Hazy yellow light, like a saint’s halo, leered at me from around the cracks, suggesting that someone, or something, was already in my room. I shuddered and continued tentatively down the hallway.
Feeling uneasy, I chastised myself for my situation. If I wasn’t so poverty stricken after my divorce, I could have afforded my own place, and not be forced to reside in this creepy, old, share home.
I reached out to turn the handle, when cold gusts surrounded me. Strange, I thought, looking around for the source of air. I folded my arms around my body, vigorously rubbing my skin.
Then I heard it. A shallow, rasping voice in my ear, unmistakable in its malice and intent.
“Leave!”
Shocked and confused I turned to see who had voiced the command, but there was no one there. Thinking I must be going crazy, I shook my head, opened the door and stepped inside.
A rope lay coiled like a snake at my feet; a noose tied at its end.
Again I heard the voice say, “Leave” as the rope began to move.
I turned and ran, knowing nothing on this holy earth would ever make me return…
By Sarah ©2018
Prompt: The Sunday Whirl, Wordle 338; and also, Sunday Photo Fiction – February 11th 2018
Yep, and don’t ever go back! Nice take on both prompts.
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Thank you,they worked well together this week!
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Love these short story posts. This gave me goosebumps! I’d never return to that room either.
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Thanks so much Rachael. Glad it gave you goosebumps! Horror is a difficult genre to write.
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It really is but you cracked the nut here!
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Good grief, that would make me run too! Verrrrry chilling.
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👻 thank you 😊
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well written 🙂
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Thank you 😊
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Your short story kept me reading. Quite intriguing. 🙂
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Thank you 😊
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Most enjoyable Sarah.
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Run! Strewth.
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You skillfully built up the atmosphere. I’m outa’ here!
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Horror leaves a lot to the imagination. Great take!
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Great job getting across the creepy ambiance — I was definitely spooked! And I’m so glad she ran. I would have left the first time I heard that voice. (SHIVER!)
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Thank you 😊
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Very good, and the depart part came as a relief!
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Thank you! I definitely would have run well before the rope!
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Ooooooo, that was scary. And what excellent Mashup of the two challenges.
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Thank you 😊
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