I’m not a lady who thinks
all that glitters is gold
So, I don’t believe
everything I’m told.
For I learnt long ago
Words have two meanings,
And you best be sure of
the way that they’re leaning.
We all seek heaven
For the here and the now
But sometimes we miss
The way, and the how.
When I look to the left
See my spirit is leaving,
I must change my path
Despite my heart grieving.
For though I wish to shine
only white light,
I know of my dreams.
I know of what might.
There are those who watch,
And those who do,
and the smoke screen is all
to distinguish the two.
None of us are innocent.
None of us are pure.
We each play our part,
of that I am sure.
And as my transgressions float
Across whispering wind,
They remind me of all
The ways I have sinned.
I’m not the same person
I was years ago,
yet my deeds still follow
wherever I go.
When the piper comes for me
shadows, taller than my soul,
I promise I’ll tell my secrets,
Yes. I’ll tell them all.
By Sarah ©2017
Prompt: Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie, Music Prompt #10, response to Led Zeppelin’s “Stairway to Heaven”
Very beautiful poem! Written in a rhymed verse at that! Pure gold 🙂
Bookmarking it.
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Ah! Read it again and it was rhymed at points. But I could swear it felt like reading the rhymed poem all the way.
So good!
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Thank you so much 😊 yes, there were some near-rhyme in there so glad it read as though not!
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beautiful .. 🙂
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Thank you 😊 felt somewhat sacrilegious using “Stairway to Heaven” as a prompt! Glad it came off ok👌🏻
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knowing you were working from that made it even more impressive, you did very well Sarah 🙂
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😘😘 that means so much!!!
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I loved the flow, but loved the message even more. We are who we are…thank goodness. Life experience MAKES us who we are. Nice, Sarah.
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Wonderfully written poem using some of the song lyrics rhymes with your own words. A bit dark but at least as I know it All of us end up at judgement on that last day reciting our many sins. Beautifully done such flow as Wind Kisses says. Thank you for participating this week 🙂
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Thanks so much! And thanks for providing such a great challenge!
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You’re welcome. Ambiguous songs can be fascinating in terms of response 🙂
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Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie, Sunday Confessionals: Secrets
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Really good Sarah.
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Phenomenal poem, achingly beautiful.
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Intense read! Very well-written!
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thanks so much 🙏🏻
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