I bask in the
s
u
n
Whatever this is,
it won’t be gone
No ‘ifs… ‘ no ‘ands’… and yet, still a but
Is it I?
All I have?
Afire without an ‘a’
…is just a fire without light
By Sarah ©2024
W3 Prompt #111:
Wea’ve Written Weekly
Dumb
I bask in the
s
u
n
Whatever this is,
it won’t be gone
No ‘ifs… ‘ no ‘ands’… and yet, still a but
Is it I?
All I have?
Afire without an ‘a’
…is just a fire without light
By Sarah ©2024
W3 Prompt #111:
Wea’ve Written Weekly
By Sarah 
This is absolutely beautiful! I love everything about it, the form, the rhythm, the words… Thank you.
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Thank you so much 🙏🏻 😊
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This is very well done!
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Thank you 🙏🏻
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When I saw the title, I was hoping for Nirvana, and I wasn’t disappointed. 😀 Nice take!
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Thank you so much thanks 😊 Glad you enjoyed it!
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nicely done. Especially the depth of the final words.
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Thanks so much 😊
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Truly ingenious. And also the way you played with the word ‘sun’ ~ I love how you made this form your own, Sarah!
❤
David
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A lovely poem. I enjoyed the style very much.
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Hi Sarah,
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3 prompt, hosted for the first time by the amazing Jude Italki, is now live!
https://skepticskaddish.com/2024/06/19/w3-prompt-112-weave-written-weekly/
Enjoy❣️
Much love,
David
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