I dream of escape
Escape from in here
Here is my nightmare
Nightmare and fear
Spiralling down
Down to the black
Black prefers dark
Dark doesn’t talk back
It’s been a long time
Time has stood still
Still in my mind
Mind been through hell
But now dawn is rising
Rising to light
Light from a doorway
Doorway in sight
I cross the threshold
threshold anew
anew expectations
Expectations of you
Please hold my hand
hand trembling, I go
Go through the opening
Opening so slow
Guide me with love
Love me carefully
Carefully we’ll weave
Weave a journey
By Sarah ©2021
That is so cool, a beautiful poem and I like that form.
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Thanks so much !
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The format fits the tone and the sense of going through doors n a journey.
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thanks Charlie. I haven’t tried a loop poem before and am glad as that was my attention
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I love how each line trails on into the next with the repetition of words. Gentle love is a necessity for all. Beautiful piece Sarah!
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thanks so much
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