Jake’s eyes sparkled as he slid the plate towards me.
The sliver of cake was moist; loaded with carrots. Ground walnuts, covered the rich cream cheese icing. I picked up my fork, mouth watering in anticipation.
“Where’s yours? I don’t want to consume all these calories on my own!” I teased.
“This one’s especially for you,” he replied.
Shrugging, I dug the fork into the cake, feeling metal hit metal.
Breaking it apart, I gasped. In the middle lay a cushion-cut, diamond ring.
“It’s a carat cake,” Jake joked, locking his eyes on mine. “Will you marry me Isabel?”
By Sarah ©2018
Prompt: Carrot Ranch, Flash Fiction Challenge – March 16, 2018. Task: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story about carrot cake. It can be classic or unusual. Why is there cake? How does it feature in the story. Go where the prompt leads.
Enjoyed your story very much. And now I cave carrot cake!
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That prompt made me want a slice too. Carrot cake is my favourite
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Love this Sarah!
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Thanks Ritu 😃
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I love carrot cake. I had it yesterday and now I shall have to eat it today 😊
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Great writing BTW
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Thank you 😊
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It’s my fave! I was super hungry thanks to this prompt
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Awww how adorable! And I LOVE the word play. So creative. And I hope she said ‘Yes’! 😀
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How can she not? 😊 🥕
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I didn’t see that coming! Love the idea of a carat cake luckily not a bit corn-e at all 🙂
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Hahaha! Lucky she was eating it with a fork and didn’t bite into it (like I would’ve done)
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Or thankfully not swallowed, as I love carrot cake and would’ve wolfed it down 🙂
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Aah nice. I do enjoy your flash fiction Sarah.
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Thanks so much Hayley 😊 appreciate your comment
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Had me at carrot cake. The extra carat takes the cake.
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Haha 😂 nice one!
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Very clever play on words, Sarah. I love it!
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Thanks Norah 😃
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Awwwww how adorable.
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Thank you 😊
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And now you’ve made me hungry. Thanks!
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I made myself hungry too whilst writing it…if that’s any consolation ! Lol
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I loved this, very good. I now need carrot cake! Great writing.
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Thanks so much! 😊🥕
Appreciate you stopping by
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Carat cake!!! Outstanding, loved it.
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Thanks so much 😃
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What a wonderfully romantic story. Loved it plus you made my mouth water.
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Thank you 😊 I enjoyed writing this one
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Snap up that man! Gotta get a guy with a sense of humor!
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Absolutely !
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Really clever story!
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Thanks so much 😊
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Now that’s a memorable carrot cake, Sarah!
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Thank you 😊
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so sweet!
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What a cute and punny story! Love it! 🙂
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Thanks so much 😀
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