Author’s note: Written for my beautiful nanna, Edie, who finally let go last night. May you Rest In Peace with Bill.
“Take this balloon,” Nanna began. “Its life begins much like ours. All shrivelled, until it’s filled with air and starts to grow.”
Bringing it to her lips, it slowly inflated. “Sometimes, we push too far and…”
“BANG!” I interrupted.
“Exactly,” she smiled. “Sometimes, we tie a knot, when there’s still room to grow.”
She made a pinching motion with her fingers. “But sometimes, we can hold it just right. Get a balance between the two.”
“And then what?” I asked.
She laughed, “It’s time to let go!”
Together, we watched the balloon empty and fizzle, before coming to rest.
By Sarah ©2018
Prompt: Carrot Ranch, Flash Fiction Challenge – March 8, 2018. Task: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story that features a balloon. It can be a party balloon or a hot air balloon. How does it add to your story? Go where the prompt leads.
I’m sorry to hear that your wonderful nana Edie has passed away, I remember the post you made in the Weekly Tanka
Challenge.https://bysarahwhiley.wordpress.com/2017/08/24/seventy-five-years/
My thoughts are with you.
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Thanks so much Elsie. It’s a very sad time for us indeed
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I’m sorry to hear of the loss of your Nanna. She was obviously much loved. Your story is a touching tribute filled with wisdom, not just hot air.
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Thank you Norah. Appreciate your kind words
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sorry to hear that such a dear one has gone, thank you for your beautiful post.
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Thanks so much. Appreciate your kind words
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This is lovely Sarah. I can imagine her doing just that. Thinking of you today.
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Thanks so much Di. Your kind words are truly appreciated
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❤
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Sorry for your loss Sarah. What a touching tribute 🎈
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Thank you Ritu. Appreciate your kind words
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💜
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Condolences Sarah and a big hug
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Thanks so much Fiona
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Oh I absolutely love the symbolism of this. It’s perfect and very moving. Lovely.
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Thank you so much. Appreciate you stopping by Hayley
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Sorry for your loss!
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Thank you
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I love this. Sorry for your loss. I dedicated a post to my grandpa when he died, it’s a lovely creative release.
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Thanks Lucy. Writing does help. Appreciate your kind words
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So sorry for your loss, but what a beautiful tribute 🙂
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Thank you so much x
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What a beautiful wee tribute to an obviously amazing woman. I’m so sorry for your loss ❤️
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Thank you so much Rachael
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What a lovely tribute using the balloon prompt. So sorry for your loss.
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I’m so sorry for you loss. When I lost my grammy, I felt some of the emotions expressed here. There is a time when it’s time. Beautiful.
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I’m so sorry. This is such a lovely post to remember her with.
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Reblogged this on jagahdilmein and commented:
I relate to this story so much that I couldn’t help sharing it. Philosophy of life in just 99 words.
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Thank you so much x
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It was too perfect and too powerful to ignore.
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😊😊😊
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Ah, Sarah, what a loss for you. It takes the air right out of us when a loved one “let’s go” and yet that is one of the most beautiful and joyful metaphors for life that I’ve heard. My condolences to you and your family. Please read the end-note in the “Balloons” collection. It’s dedicated to your Nanna. Thank you for sharing her with us.
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Thanks so much Charli. That means so much to me and my family xx
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