“I don’t care what you do with it, I just want it gone,” Alex said, pointing at the dollhouse.
It was an ugly thing, by all accounts. The Victorian style was usually so decorative. But this was grotesque – asymmetrical wraparound porches, gingerbread trim, gabled roofs, and lairy colours.
“What’s wrong with it?” I asked suspiciously, “Apart from the obvious,” I added, gesturing to the fascade.
“Nothing,” Alex said. “It was left to me by my Aunt Clara. Silly old coot. What do I want with a dollhouse? Even the executor was laughing. Seriously, a grown man and a dollhouse!”
“She must’ve wanted you to have it for some reason,” I pressed, “I mean, I can take it. Lacey will love it. But are you sure?”
“Take it,” he insisted, “Aunt Clara really lost it. When she promised me her house, I never dreamt this was what she meant! Silly old coot,” he repeated.
So I took it.
Lacey, as I anticipated, squealed with delight. She threw open the doors and starting playing immediately. I was pleased she liked it.
Lacey hadn’t been playing long when she called out. I hoped she hadn’t tired of it already!
I entered her bedroom, and noticed her arm down one of the chimneys.
“Lace…” I began.
“Something’s in here,” she said, pulling out a piece of paper.
I read the contents, revealing what it was. I smiled, holding the deed to Clara’s mansion. “Looks like Alex is going to have that house after all.”
By Sarah ©2018
Prompt: Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie, First Line Friday – February 16th, 2018; and also, Sammi Scribbles, Weekend Writing Prompt, #42 – Revelation. Prose Challenge – In words or less, write a story about the uncovering of a secret.
That’s great – love the characterisations
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Thank you 😊
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nice story, I like it … but Lacey should keep the mansion 🙂
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I did toy with the idea of them keeping the deed, but integrity won 😃
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naw he had already given it away!
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I like this, Sarah! I was expecting it to take a spooky twist, instead it was a nice surprise!
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Thank you! I did think about going down the creepy route with this (dollhouses…*shudder*) but thought a nice surprise played out better 😊
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Loved this Sarah. Aunt Clara wasn’t so silly.
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Indeed. She was just keeping it safe for him 😊
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Good one Sarah, well done.
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Thanks Michael
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I think she should keep both houses. He apparently had no love lost for the “old coot” and deserves nothing but a promise he chose to give away.
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