
I should never have followed my urge to explore the abandoned asylum, but my hunger to venture into the spirit-world was boundless. I’d done this kind of thing before. Many times. No problem.
Mesh fencing, chains and “No Trespassing” signs plastered everywhere, should’ve served as a warning, but I didn’t want to miss out. This place was reputed to be a powerhouse of hauntings, on account of the madness and misery of the hundreds of people who’d died here.
The wind howled around the main administration building as I entered. I consulted the map I’d drawn, heading to the notorious “Bullpit”. A ward that had once housed the most violent male patients.
I hadn’t been in there long when I heard a sound. A scraping along the bare, tiled floors. My hair stood on end, senses on high alert. Excitedly, I grabbed my EMF meter and night vision goggles, and heard a shout from one of the rooms.
That is all the memory I have, of how I died. Now I too, am trapped here. Another crazy spirit, existing in parallel with the real world, where the sands of time move so slowly.
I should never have followed that urge.
By Sarah ©2018
Prompt: Daily Post Daily Prompt – parallel, warning; Sunday Photo Fiction, February 18th 2018; and also, The Sunday Whirl, Wordle 339
oh love it!
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Thank you 😊
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Spooky! Well done with 200 words.
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Thanks! The word limit can always be a challenge
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very evocative
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Thank you. Appreciate you stopping by 😃
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Gee. Thankfully spirits can still post on WordPress, or else we would never have heard this story!
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Haha 😂 absolutely. The powers they possess…
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Well done, fits both prompts so well. Chilling.
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Thank you. I like combining prompts for an extra level of challenge, but also when they complement each other it works so well.
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Perfect build up and excellent climax. I’m having chills!
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Thanks so much 😊 glad you enjoyed it. Appreciate you stopping by
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No they most definitely shouldn’t have! Eek!
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Memory of death, or memory of the last human breath? There seems to be a difference, when the spirits continue to live on 🙂
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Great story!
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Thank you 😊
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Oh so clever!
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Thanks Di 😊
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What were you expecting? Every asylum is haunted!
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Agreed with you on that!
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In the mid 1960s I worked on such a ward, we kept it pitch black at night, trying to encourage sleep. I well remember remember my horror as one night the floor became fluid. I still hope to write about that night.
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Oh my goodness! We have one not far from here that I have done some ghost tours on. After one night seeing a dark figure, I will never go back. I would be interested to read about your experience, when you get to it
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Oops.
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This gave me a few shivers. Asylums do that to me…..old ones that existed many years ago. I think so many awful things happened in these places. It gives me the creeps. But I enjoyed reading Sarah!!
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Thank you – so glad you enjoyed it. We have one about 1/2 hr drive from where I live and it always makes me feel funny
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Nice one!
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Thanks so much
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well done. they need a higher fence!
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Absolutely!
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A well-written matter of some urge and see
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😂😂😂 nice one
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Yeah, this is seriously creepy
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Thank you 😊 👻
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I rarely get to read the stories now, but I wanted to make at least some time today. This is a fantastically creppy tale. I love it.
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I love this story, Sarah! Really creepy.
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Thank you….that was my intention 🙂
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Excellent Mashup of the two challenges.
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Thank you 😊
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Spooky! I like what you did! She should never have gone alone. Brave, but crazy.
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Agreed. Safety in numbers…although in horror movies that doesn’t always work out so well either! Lol. They just get picked off one by one
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Yep, but it’s usually the stupid ones who get naked in a haunted house (what’s with that?) or the ones who go into the basement when the electricity has gone out (what’s with that?). lol
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Or upstairs when there’s no way out! Lol
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