Cinquain, Poetry by Sarah

Outside Myself

Confused; detached.
Watching, hearing, saying,
never understanding; I’m outside

By Sarah ©2017

Image credit kellepics via Pixabay

Prompt: Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie, Sunday Writing Prompt, #225 – Know Thyself

4 thoughts on “Outside Myself”

  1. Brevity is the soul of wit – and perhaps self-understanding too?
    Sometimes the fewest words can leave a large impression, and in this case, it allows for the mind to wonder about particulars, without having to dig too deep, because there is a certain sense of dislocation, when you step back, feeling detached and overwhelmed. This has an existential crisis feeling – well done Sarah 🙂 and thanks for playing the Sunday Writing Prompt this week 🙂 I hope you have a wonderful end of weekend and a great week 🙂


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