He punishes her.
A blush heats her face. Confused,
she bows her head low…
knows she’s still bound to him but
aware it’s unravelling.
By Sarah ©2017
Prompt: Daily Post Daily Prompt – blush; and also, Colleen’s Weekly Poetry Challenge, heat & confuse and, Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie, Photo Challenge #175
Really good. A thrill , actually 🙂
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Thank you 😊
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WOW! This is a powerful poem. I can feel the woman’s pain and confusion. Well done! ❤
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Thanks Colleen 😀
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knows she’s still bound to him but
aware it’s unravelling.
She is suffering but there are still lots of hope. Love here is really ‘blind’ in a bad way!
Hank
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Absolutely!
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Perfect combination. Absolutely loved it!
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Thank you 😊
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